The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. This money would be better spent on providing new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
this
modernization, everyone wants to have their home with latest infrastructure. Preserving old housing pattern in a big suburb in
this
whole globe charges a vast amount of
money
due to lace of experienced workers. As per my opinion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
totally disagree with the statement that
this
money
should behold on building new dwelling and expansion of routes because
this
also
demands more investment.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have valid reasons to support my statement which is explained below.
To begin
with, saving the old structure of buildings gives numerous benefits to individual, society and the government.
First
of all, we can have proof of our ancient building structures for our new generation which will remind us and our future generation about the golden art.
Secondly
, The
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
is more benefited by
this
as it will attract more
forign
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
tourist to take a visit to
this
preserved golden
buildings
Suggestion
building
.
Lastly
, upcoming
yougth
a young person (especially a young man or boy)
youth
get an idea to make infused infrastructure with old and latest designs.
Althought
Suggestion
Thought
is demanding more investment to restore old
buildings but
Accept comma addition
buildings, but
it is worth it.
However
, Developing new
housig
structures collectively in which people are housed
housing
societies and route expansion
also
costs more than we think. The most important reason is that today's architectures asking for more
money
for their work as they are spending huge
money
on education and time.
Moreover
, competitions in the societies increases a lot at present,
thus
this
makes current architectures on high demand. For an instant, just
last
year we have renovated our house and it charged us about 2
lacs
used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs
less
loss
where as my uncle
rebuilded
build again
rebuilt
his old house with new ones from beginning end and that took almost 12
lac
used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs
less
in total. To summarize, what
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i believe is if we save our old building give us more benefits and
also
costs less than to rebuild new housing and roads

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