You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, Describe the situation Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work. Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with my current living conditions. While the accommodation itself is fine, my
housemate
has become intolerable making it almost impossible for me to work. I hope you will consider my situation favourably. Let me explain my situation. The trouble started about three months ago when my
housemate
first
moved in. Prior to that, everything was fine; my old
housemate
was extremely considerate. My current
housemate
,
however
, stays up almost all
nights
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and plays incessantly loud music. As
such
, I have not been able to sleep properly and
therefore
cannot concentrate on my studies. Would you kindly transfer me or my
housemate
to another room? I would much prefer to live with someone who is quieter and more
considerable
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others. As long as it is quiet, I do not mind whom I live with. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Smith
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