Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Most people think that teacher should teach children to be a good person, while other people think that it is a responsibility of their parents.

This

essay agrees with the belief that a role of parents instructs their children

beceuse

for the reason that; on account of

because

they know their children the most and they have more

time

together. Parents can understand what types of teaching that suitable

to

Suggestion

for

teaching their children, because they was grown

thier

of them or themselves

their

there

children since was born. They know what thing that children like or dislike, some children prefer to copying from role model, it is their parent, whereas some children prefer to learn from the story that

thier

of them or themselves

their

there

parent tell.

For example

, my sister likes Aultraman, it is a character in Japaness anime, so when my parents want to teach her they will tell the story about Aultraman and adding information about good

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

in the story,

such

as Aultreaman is honest so he is

super hero

Suggestion

a super hero

. Teacher have a lot of

time

with children in school, they

also

teach them about manner of society. But,

the most

Suggestion

the more time

time

that children

are spend

Suggestion

have spent

over a year is living with their parents more than study with

teacher

Suggestion

a teacher

.

For instance

, in Thailand, children spend about 200 hours per year in school for learning, while they spend

time

with their parents over 300 hours per year. In conclusion, parents should teach the children more than teacher because they know about their children and

besides they

Accept comma addition

besides, they

have

time

to teach them to be a nice person.