Nowadays the ways people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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@Basile, We do not plan to do

such

hardening. I have been working on various projects, from in house to enterprise clients, from POC to Alexa top 100 sites, there is no

such

requirement except for a payment related project. For that project, not only the application needs to pass certain audit and follow various compliances, the processes and the paperwork are

also

tremendous. It takes months to understand what shouldn't be done, and months to verifying the project itself follow all those practices.

Wed Aug 14 2019

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Nowadays the ways people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Fully explain your ideas

Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The availability of entertainment such as video games on handheld devices are harmful to individual and to the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that libraries are a waste of money and resource and computers can largely replace them. Discuss both the view

People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our life generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialism. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?