Some people claim that newspaper is the best way to get the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media. TWE

It is said that newspaper exert a huge influence about the way people get the latest information.
but
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But
I strongly believe that Internet
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
play a more
siginificant
important in effect or meaning
significant
role
on
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in
getting
news
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the news
The reasons for my opinion involve the recognition that newspaper published at most once a day response much slower in terms of some breaking news which may
related
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relate
to the
commen
belonging to or participated in by a community as a whole; public
common
coming
comment
people's life,
such
as
earthquake
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earthquakes
an earthquake
.
By contrast
, those who have
get
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gotten
got
information from some
internat
a computer network consisting of a worldwide network of computer networks that use the TCP/IP network protocols to facilitate data transmission and exchange
internet
internal
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
like news applications or social apps are well-informed whether it is urgent news or major evens, as many
offical
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officials
official
has already
use
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used
internet release news, which can be
full
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fully
trusted by the citizens. Meanwhile, compared with the traditional press wasting a large number of paper, using internet spear news is
a
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an
environment-friendly way which reduce the changes in nature caused by human
cativities
any specific behavior
activities
.
however there
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However, there
However there
are some disadvantages.
a
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A
few
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little
part of online media blow the current affairs out of
propotion
the quotient obtained when the magnitude of a part is divided by the magnitude of the whole
proportion
probation
in order to win the public attention
,
Accept space
,
which could enable the audience distort the truth.
On the other hand
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