Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In our
sociaty
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
life,
environment
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the environment
is
alway
at all times; all the time and on every occasion
always
the
hotest
used of physical heat; having a high or higher than desirable temperature or giving off heat or feeling or causing a sensation of heat or burning
hottest
issue which is the most serious problem now we have to deal with. Some
peole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
say that individuals can do nothing to improve the
environment
, only governments and large companies can make a difference. But I firmly agree that both of them have to work together to improve the
environment
, not only governments and large companies can do that. On the right hand, government and large companies have a huge
effect
on the
environment
. The government is the
person
who
have
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has
the
most of power and
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most power and
influencein
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influence in
the country. They
exforce
expose or make accessible to some action or influence
expose
the law and they can punish some people who break the law,
exspeacily
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
in the
environment
. About the some large companies, they have a lot of factories.
Beacause
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Because
of
this
, if they do not control waste treatment closely, the
environment
may be polluted by their activities.
On the other hand
, individuals play an important part in protecting
environment
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the environment
. Citizens
is
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are
the
person
who
follow
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follows
the law.
In addition
, the succeed of a
goverment's
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government's
governments
plan is deeply depend on the
citizens
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citizens'
citizen
citizen's
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
about
envioment
the act of sharing in the activities of a group
involvement
. One
person
can not
can not
cannot
change the
effect
of
pollution but
Accept comma addition
pollution, but
if they
works
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work
together, the
environment
will become better gradually. Most of people in
ourworld
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our world
is
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are
normal individual so that a small activity of a
person
will have a huge
effect
on
enviroment
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the environment
environment
. That's even bigger than the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
and industries' result with our
envirment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
. In conclusion,
although
the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
and industries may have a big
effect
immediately,
however
, making a long and
last
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lasting
effect
on
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of
our
envioment
the act of sharing in the activities of a group
involvement
is an individual.

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