These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people, want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

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Teaching has been one of the noble professions because of the many responsibilities it has in enhancing the future of the country. Education System's are facing some serious problems in employing teacher's, especially for secondary schools student's. The problem might have arisen in handling student's particular in these age groups because of the modern fast paced lifestyle.

On the other hand

, school faculty should take utmost care in enforcing strict disciplinary actions.

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Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people, want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Violence in the media promotes violence in society. To what extent do you agree?

Everybody Should Be Allowed Admission to Universities or College Programs regardless of their Academic Ability

Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a countries success, while others think that other factors can be used to measure a countries success. What are these Factors? Which do you think are most important?

Some people think that managers alone should make decisions in the company, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?