Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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Socialising and social media are two different platforms available in the modern world for the social life of people. All these kinds of new technology have made people closer as well as

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effect of modern communication developments

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the social life of people. I agree about the fact that it has a negative impact

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Gone are those days of being together and meeting their loved ones in person. Nowadays people are held up by their busy

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routine, making

them far away from socialising. Communication

have fell

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has felt

have felt

a downfall by just becoming mere emails and messages throughout phones and laptops because

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it is

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time saving and less of chaos. The meaning of meeting up and having a chat with friends as well as family is just a click away due to the

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up technology. The most negative impact in my opinion is on that of

children

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the children

. They grow in a world where blood relatives and friends are squeezed into some video chats and messages. Meeting people only is a long lost myth. So to

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want to emphasise the importance of communication in person which will definitely affect the growth of the upcoming generation.

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