Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. What extent do you agree or disagree?

Socialising and social media are two different platforms available in the modern world for the social life of people. All these kinds of new technology have made people closer as well as
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Gone are those days of being together and meeting their loved ones in person. Nowadays people are held up by their busy
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