You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work. In your letter give details of the amount of time you need. In your letter suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.

Dear Mr Bond, I'm Serkan who works for
retailing
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department. I want to share my necessary request
to
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you. That's why I write
this
letter. In
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5
days
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I need time off
work
. Cause of that my child is sick. He is at the hospital with his mother.
However
, they may need some assistance from me. He is could need my help while he is resting at
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he
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hospital.
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to buy some food or water.
Additionally
, they need clean clothes too. By reason of
this
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I want to some off
days
of
work
.
Also
, our doctor said that
,
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5
days
is enough for
recovery
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of my child.
Therefore
, 5
days
off
work
is enough for me. I want to suggest something for recovering my
work
. When I start working at
company
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I can fill my duties at the weekends. I would resolve our companies works on
this
work
shift. I wish you could give me some off
days
work
. Sincerely yours.
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