All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?

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Recently, Overweight

has been increasing

Suggestion

has increased

signficantly

in a statistically significant way

significantly

bewteen

internal to, involving members of (a group of people)

between

all society members around the would. In

this

essay, I will discuss a couple the reasons for

this

phenomenon,

such

as our current

ilfestyle

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

then

, I will illustrate some of the

majourments

the act or process of assigning numbers to phenomena according to a rule

measurements

that can be done to stop it,

such

as taxing the fast

food

restaurants.

To begin

, a

siginificant

important in effect or meaning

significant

reason for

obesity

is the

lisfestyle

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

lifestyles

that we live these days.

Firstly

, a large number of people eat fast

food

every day, which contains a huge

percentages

Suggestion

percentage

of carbs and calories.

As a result

, these contents will affect our

health awfully

Accept comma addition

health, awfully

and cause

health

problems, one of these problems is increasing in weight.

For example

, a

resport

to give an account or representation of in words

report

from the University of Jordan showed that more that seventy percent of the Jordanian people eat fast

food

twice a week at least, and eighty percent of them are suffering from overweight.

Moreover

, many of us do not do any daily exercises or sports.

This

will increase the chance to have

obesity

in the future.

For instance

, the same report mentioned above showed that more than 90% of the Jordanian people do not play any sport. Clearly, consuming unhealthy

food

and not playing any sport will lead to overweight. Despite the fact that

obesity

is on the rise and there are many factors that support it, there are some procedures,

such

as taxing the fast

food

restaurants and offering free sports facilities, that can toggle

this

phenomenon.

To begin

with, governments should tax

restautants

a building where people go to eat

restaurants

restaurant

that offers unhealthy

food

Consequently

, their prices will rise and many of

there

of them or themselves

their

customers will stop buying their awful products. A prime example is research that has been done by two researchers

form

a giver or sender

from

the University of Technology in Dubai illustrate that when the government increased the tax on fast

food

restaurants, a large number of their clients stopped buying from them.

In addition

, governments should build

health

and sport

facilites

a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry

facilities

and encourage people to visit them and do exercises.

This

will tackle

obesity

and keep people healthy.

For instance

, a report

form

a giver or sender

from

Dubai Government

Suggestion

the Dubai Government

showed that their

people

Suggestion

peoples'

peoples

health

has became

Suggestion

has become

better when they built these type of facilities. To clarify, imposing fast

food

restaurants and encourage people to play sports can tackle overweight. To conclude,

Obesity

has many factors and reasons that support it

such

as eating unhealthy

food

;

however

, we can overcome

this

issue by imposing these restaurants and encourage people to play sports.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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