All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?

Recently, Overweight
has been increasing
Suggestion
has increased
signficantly
in a statistically significant way
significantly
bewteen
internal to, involving members of (a group of people)
between
all society members around the would. In
this
essay, I will discuss a couple the reasons for
this
phenomenon,
such
as our current
ilfestyle
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
,
then
, I will illustrate some of the
majourments
the act or process of assigning numbers to phenomena according to a rule
measurements
that can be done to stop it,
such
as taxing the fast
food
restaurants.
To begin
, a
siginificant
important in effect or meaning
significant
reason for
obesity
is the
lisfestyle
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
lifestyles
that we live these days.
Firstly
, a large number of people eat fast
food
every day, which contains a huge
percentages
Suggestion
percentage
of carbs and calories.
As a result
, these contents will affect our
health awfully
Accept comma addition
health, awfully
and cause
health
problems, one of these problems is increasing in weight.
For example
, a
resport
to give an account or representation of in words
report
from the University of Jordan showed that more that seventy percent of the Jordanian people eat fast
food
twice a week at least, and eighty percent of them are suffering from overweight.
Moreover
, many of us do not do any daily exercises or sports.
This
will increase the chance to have
obesity
in the future.
For instance
, the same report mentioned above showed that more than 90% of the Jordanian people do not play any sport. Clearly, consuming unhealthy
food
and not playing any sport will lead to overweight. Despite the fact that
obesity
is on the rise and there are many factors that support it, there are some procedures,
such
as taxing the fast
food
restaurants and offering free sports facilities, that can toggle
this
phenomenon.
To begin
with, governments should tax
restautants
a building where people go to eat
restaurants
restaurant
that offers unhealthy
food
.
Consequently
, their prices will rise and many of
there
of them or themselves
their
customers will stop buying their awful products. A prime example is research that has been done by two researchers
form
a giver or sender
from
the University of Technology in Dubai illustrate that when the government increased the tax on fast
food
restaurants, a large number of their clients stopped buying from them.
In addition
, governments should build
health
and sport
facilites
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
and encourage people to visit them and do exercises.
This
will tackle
obesity
and keep people healthy.
For instance
, a report
form
a giver or sender
from
Dubai Government
Suggestion
the Dubai Government
showed that their
people
Suggestion
peoples'
peoples
health
has became
Suggestion
has become
better when they built these type of facilities. To clarify, imposing fast
food
restaurants and encourage people to play sports can tackle overweight. To conclude,
Obesity
has many factors and reasons that support it
such
as eating unhealthy
food
;
however
, we can overcome
this
issue by imposing these restaurants and encourage people to play sports.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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