In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Now a day’s in modern society, the photographic trend is becoming more popular. And most of the people start focusing on taking pictures and recording films through their cameras,
instead
of using writing stories and words. In
this
essay we will argue about the both elements, to what extent we are agreed of disagreeing. While, talking about the electronic media, specifically regarding photography and films making it more attractive and simple to represent anything a few minutes rather than writing hundreds of words.
For example
, running in a tourism company and you wanted to share some tourism stories about your trips. So indeed, it’s quite better and easy to represent your company profile base on photograph album or in small videos. Other than
this
, we can record our memories in different events in our routine life. As well as its obviously beneficial to represent a company portfolio and profiles in the form or photograph presentation.
However
, a few decades ago the wiring was a very popular traditional way to express the stories and communication.
Although
it’s still associated with us, and cannot be ignored’ because now a days it’s significantly important in corporate sectors. In my opinion, somehow’ I am agreeing and disagreed as well, because its seamlessly based on topic.
Firstly
, it depends on the situation and type of communication.
Secondly
, if we are representing some stories, event,
then
I would say photography and films and more attractive and better way to adopt. Other than entertainment field, in the corporate sectors and in offices, I won’t be agree to use photographs and films in daily routine communication between different departments.
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