Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

The rapid development of modern technology has been a subject that attracts profound interests in recent years. Many people opine that the amount of

time which

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time, which

people take to hang out with their friends has decreased because of modern forms of

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communication such

as

email

and messaging

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This

leads to many disadvantages on the society. From my perspective,

this

viewpoint is justifiable to a certain extent On the one hand, depending on using of the internet devices has made people more passive and lazier.

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In

the past, to communicate with friends, people usually got together; which took a lot of

time

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though, helped to keep

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the relationship

a relationship

. Nowadays

,

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with the tools

such

as

email

and SMS human do not need to go out to meet each other.

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they just sit at home is able to chat with friends.

This

does not consume

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energy in

the bodies, which leads to obesity and cardiovascular disease.

On the other hand

,

this

reason is not utterly acceptable

beacause

for the reason that; on account of

because

this

sophisticated

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form

of

communication

also offer

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also offers

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many

benefits in

social relationship

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social relationships

a social relationship

. People living far from their relatives can contact them regularly without squandering too much

time

and high cost.

For example

, an Indonesian student who is studying in

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a nation in northern North America; the French were the first Europeans to settle in mainland Canada

Canada

can tell his information by transmitting an

email

or a short message service to his parents. It is more efficient, faster and cheaper than he calls them by phone or send

letter

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letters

.

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Other

advantages of information modern

communication

method is most people obtain simplicity to spread information or news to other population because message or text on

email

or SMS may be occupied

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as the result, they are not necessary to retype again the

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marked by correspondence or resemblance

similar

messages. The technological

advancement

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advances

in

communication

not only help human to save

time

and

money but

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money, but

also

motivate the economic global. With various companies,

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

international cooperations which have a variety of branches and subsidiary

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companies in

faraway places, new

communication

technique helping to transfer and carry out

decidions

the act of making up your mind about something

decisions

immediately from

far

being one more than three

four

sections, contribute absolutely

ptvotal

being of crucial importance

pivotal

factor in their success.

Additionally

,

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the modern communication systems impact

communication

systems impact to break up every distance make the world become smaller. In conclusion

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I think that

email

and messaging can influence on

social lives

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the social lives

because they do not have much

time

to visiting their friends.

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believes

that modern forms of

communication

will provide people to widespread their networking and linking to other people over the world.