Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion ? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Parenthood is considered one of the hardest titles to do justice
with
Suggestion
to
. A lot of people are simply lost and
dont
do not
don't
have enough knowledge to handle the title bestowed upon them. That's why some of us think
its
it is
it's
necessary that everyone should learn
this
as a skill and should know how to be a good
parent
, as a part of their formal education. I happen to agree with
this
opinion.
Firstly
, schooling is almost a mandatory period in the life of most of
world's population
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the world's population
. It is
this
young and impressionable age where the mind is ready to grasp new ideas, quickly. Being a good
parent
is one of the most necessary requirement for a balanced and healthy household, which makes it the perfect thing to be included in the list of talents to be acquired.
In other words
, schools should
also
provide the social grooming to succeed in life, along with educational lessons.
Secondly
, to be a good
parent
, a person needs to be social, responsible and mature. All of these traits are absolutely necessary to take care of a child, but
also
helps
in
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with
the other aspects of life.
For example
, if a teenager knows what is expected of him/her to be a good
parent
, they would make a more focused effort to become an individual that can be a good mother or father.
Lastly
, I believe the world would be a much better place, if every kid would have good parents and
hence
can get all the love and care that they deserve.
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