The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town and cities closing . Do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays online shopping is a new modern

technological

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technology

trend of purchasing goods, because products are easily available at doorstep with an effective range of prices as well as save time in today’s

busyworking

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busy working

and

health tiring

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health, tiring

environment

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environment, therefore

therefore

refers to the speaker or writer

completely agree with the statement that

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the upsurge of online shopping bring lead to close all the traditional bankrupt shops in the future at the town and cities.

To begin

with, online shopping gives people their demanding branded products

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with

a single click

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their home doors easily

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meanwhile shopping sites, to enhance their online productivity and popularity, site dealers weekly provide their consumers impressive discounted offers which pester the buyers to shop.

Hence

, People get unique shopping experience, costumers

get

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gets

their desiring product at economical rates than that of market rates

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this

is the reason why online shopping is impending great competition to the shops in the town and cities.

Moreover

, online shopping is the time saving technique in the today’s technological era. To illustrate, shopping sites uniquely providing their clients the advanced options

such

as “filter” which helps the purchasers to choose their items according to their choice of-colour

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brand

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size

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type and money with the full descriptive features of the item.

In addition

payments and

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payments, and

delivery

of the products

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has also become

is also becoming

also becomes

also

become an easy task as buyers can pay e-commerce or cash on

delivery

without wandering on the traffic crowded roads at focal distances

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For instance

, Amazon an online shopping site

provide

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provides

their product

delivery

with in

internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of

within

a one to two days with effective e-payment and

delivery

method, which is a convenient task of shopping for all the age groups. In conclusion, it is irrefutable that the revolution in shopping methodology increases the popularity of online shopping by offering their buyers; product availability

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cost and time efficient services which leads to the physical closure of the shops in the town and cities in

future

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the future

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