In today’s society, both Western medicine and traditional, complementary forms of medicines are now widely known and used. The effectiveness oft kinds of treatment is determined by the patient's mental attitude towards it.

Nowadays people are well aware of modern
medicine
and traditional
medicine
such
as
ayurveda
(Sanskrit) an ancient medical treatise summarizing the Hindu art of healing and prolonging life; sometimes regarded as a 5th Veda
Ayurveda
and
accupunture
treatment of pain or disease by inserting the tips of needles at specific points on the skin
acupuncture
. The mental approach
of
Suggestion
to
the
patient
decides the effectiveness of both the medicines. I partially agree to
this
and in
this
essay will explain reasons why effectiveness depends on proper
treatment
rather than
patient
's mindset. Advancement of
medical industry
Suggestion
the medical industry
is tremendous. We can find
medicine
for almost all the
disease
in the world, which are fast and safe in curing the
disease
.
In addition
to
this
, there
also
exists traditional
medicine
, which is
also
prefered
more desirable than another
preferred
prepared
for most of the diseases.
For example
, people prefer
ayurveda
(Sanskrit) an ancient medical treatise summarizing the Hindu art of healing and prolonging life; sometimes regarded as a 5th Veda
Ayurveda
for fracture and modern
medicine
for
heart transplant
Suggestion
a heart transplant
. These medicines are tested and proven to be effective. Diagnosing the
disease
and providing the correct
treatment
irrespective of
method
Suggestion
the method
we follow may cure the illness quickly.
On the other hand
, People's belief plays a huge role in
effectiveness
Suggestion
Effectiveness
. There could be a rare case where people follow one type of
medicine
and couldn't see an improved result which might be due to the different factors. Suddenly, they hear about
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
type of
medicine
from some friend and believe that it will cure them. Here, the
treatment
of
disease
from other type might be ordinary, but it is the belief of the
patient
that made
this
treatment
effective. In summary,
Although
patient
's belief is vital in curing the
disease
, I feel that it is the proper
medicine
for the diagnosed
disease
that will cure it fast and safe.
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