The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar chart provides information about the percentage of people who hold different science qualifications in

Malaysia

and

Singapore

. It is clear from the

the

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graph that

the

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most inhabitants do not hold any scientific

degree

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the participitation

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participitation

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participation

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rates

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reaching 60% and 65% in

Singapore

and

Malaysia

respictively

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respectively

According to

what is shown,

master's

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a master's

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degree

is the least earned

scientific

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a scientific

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degree

in both countries (3%). Bachelor's

degree

is more preferred in

Singapore

(20%) compared to 10 in

Malaysia

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the people of both countries tend to take school leaving exams but

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noticed in

Malaysia

(35%) compared to 30% in

Singapore

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, we could say that

Singapore

have

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significant

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higher number of

holder

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the holder

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of all scientific

qulifications

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qualifications

catogeries

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The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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