Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening? And what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

In recent times, the rate at which ex-prisoners are
commuting
perform an act, usually with a negative connotation
committing
crimes, has become alarming,
this
trend is due to several factors.
Therefore
, in
this
essay; the causes of
this
problem would be looked into and possible ways of solving them would be dwelled on.
First let's
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First, let's
look at the reasons ex-criminals go back to their vomits. The
first
factor responsible for
this
trend is; the environment where people serve their jail terms. The surrounding of a criminal is a crucial matter, take as an example; In developed countries, the main purpose of jailing an offender is for reformation,
thus
, everything required for change of attitude is provided,
in contrast
to developing and underdeveloped
countries whose
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countries, whose
aim for sentencing convicted person
is
Suggestion
are
punishment and frustration; the criminals are frustrated until they reach their elastic limit and break,
consequently
,
this
hardens the minds of the criminals and they become brutal committing more serious crimes. To tackle
this
problem, the government should provide an atmosphere that encourages reformation of mind, emotion and psyche rather than a brutal environment.
Secondly
, living with other criminals, fuel the desires of other prisoners towards crime.
This
is due to the
favtvthat
humans naturally learn from
themselves
objective case of they
them
. Take
for instance
, a criminal that was sentenced
as a result
of theft and the other was jailed for murder, when both of them are put together as prison mate, they learn more incriminating things from each other.
Also
, allowing a petty offender to be prison mates with
an
Suggestion
a
hardened criminal, it won't take so much effort to influence the criminal with a petty
offense
a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
offence
. A solution to
this
, is to keep petty offenders away from felonious criminals,
furthermore
, criminals with capital offences should be given capital punishment, to prevent them from affecting others negatively. To sum it all, the environment and the company, prisoners interact with determines the attitude ex-prisoners have towards crime, so
therefore
, the government should provide a reforming surroundings and
also
separate the goats and
sheeps
woolly usually horned ruminant mammal related to the goat
sheep
amongst the criminal and
lastly
, giving capital punishment to those who deserve it.
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