Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

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Educational

instistution's

an organization founded and united for a specific purpose

institutions

play an important role in each and

everyones

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everyone's

everyone

life.They provide the information, which is

foundation

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the foundation

a foundation

for the future. Its

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welcome move if they are going to make it. Lets discuss in detail regarding the same. Nowadays, both the parents are working, in order to provide better facilities

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for

their children. But they forgot that they are neglecting their kids, without spending

time

with them.

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school

are going

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is going

to provide training on how to become

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responsible father or mother

then

it's not only good for their future but

also

for their

generation. Each father or mother should teach their child

with

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how to behave with various people like stranger, friends and

won

used of a single unit or thing; not two or more

one

family. They

also

should teach them what not to do,

for example

, they should say to them not to smoke, drink and not to tease anyone.

Moreover

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Moreover, this

this

little

people

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person

should know how to balance their

proffessional

engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood

professional

and family live. It

can't be learn

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can't be learned

can't be learnt

in a short

time

, so they need to be given input from childhood, so that they will ready when

time

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the time

arrives. Not only

do but

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do, but

also

donot's

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do not's

should

also

be taught,

then

only they can lead in

better way

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a better way

. In conclusion, It's not

only reponsibility

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the only responsibility

only responsibility

of teaching

sector but

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sector, but

also

each parent and those who are major too.

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most of the

time

, as a student, they spend more

time

in it, so it will better

to have

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have

major information from them.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays, International Tourism is one of the biggest industries in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

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Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function well if individuals were free to do as they please. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? what other measures do you think might be effective?