Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Recently, the study of foreign languages

have been

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has been

had been

a topic of great debate. It is

beleived

accept as true; take to be true

believed

by some that the sole purpose of acquiring a non native language is to work and travel, while others opine that it has a broader prospect. In my opinion, despite of more employment

oppurtunities

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunities

and ease of travelling, knowing many

languagescan

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languages can

also

help in studies and

better understanding

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a better understanding

of others culture.

To begin

with, due to globalization acquiring a new job and international travel has become

easy

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easier

, but dependent on multi-linguality.

This

becasue

for the reason that; on account of

because

international tourism industry

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the international tourism industry

has become a tremendously successful business, it has increased both the sight seeing chances for the visitors and the employment

oppurtunies

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunities

for the

locals

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local

dwellers

someone who purchases and maintains an inventory of goods to be sold

dealers

who know how to communicate in other dialects.

For example

Accept space

The Times has

unveild

revealed; especially by having a veil removed

unveiled

a report showing that the services industry has become a major job provider in the US from 2017 onward. Obviously

this

will have a paramount effect on the income per capita.

On the other hand

, there are some who believe, aim of studying other country's dialect should not be confined to a mere job or tourism, rather it helps us better understand others culture to create international

harmoney

compatibility in opinion and action

harmony

This

is due to the fact that if we are able to know well others region customs, we would be respectful

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their values.

For instance

, the most of the regional conflicts are due to cultural and religious misunderstandings, and

main reason

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the main reason

is inability to communicate well, if people are encouraged to converse freely the world would become a heavenly place. In conclusion, there is no denying the fact that many

people primarily

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people, primarily

learn a foreign tongue to travel or work in a developed country. But it is quite evident there are far many advantages of being bilingual.

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