Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Recently, the study of foreign languages
have been
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has been
had been
a topic of great debate. It is
beleived
accept as true; take to be true
believed
by some that the sole purpose of acquiring a non native language is to work and travel, while others opine that it has a broader prospect. In my opinion, despite of more employment
oppurtunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
and ease of travelling, knowing many
languagescan
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languages can
also
help in studies and
better understanding
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a better understanding
of others culture.
To begin
with, due to globalization acquiring a new job and international travel has become
easy
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easier
, but dependent on multi-linguality.
This
is
becasue
for the reason that; on account of
because
international tourism industry
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the international tourism industry
has become a tremendously successful business, it has increased both the sight seeing chances for the visitors and the employment
oppurtunies
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
for the
locals
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local
dwellers
someone who purchases and maintains an inventory of goods to be sold
dealers
who know how to communicate in other dialects.
For example
,
Accept space
,
The Times has
unveild
revealed; especially by having a veil removed
unveiled
a report showing that the services industry has become a major job provider in the US from 2017 onward. Obviously
this
will have a paramount effect on the income per capita.
On the other hand
, there are some who believe, aim of studying other country's dialect should not be confined to a mere job or tourism, rather it helps us better understand others culture to create international
harmoney
compatibility in opinion and action
harmony
.
This
is due to the fact that if we are able to know well others region customs, we would be respectful
to
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of
their values.
For instance
, the most of the regional conflicts are due to cultural and religious misunderstandings, and
main reason
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the main reason
is inability to communicate well, if people are encouraged to converse freely the world would become a heavenly place. In conclusion, there is no denying the fact that many
people primarily
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people, primarily
learn a foreign tongue to travel or work in a developed country. But it is quite evident there are far many advantages of being bilingual.
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