Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the rise of
internet
Suggestion
the internet
, buying consumer goods & services has become more and more popular. In my opinion, there is more advantage in
this
way that outweigh its disadvantage
,
Accept space
,
as I been online shopping for past few years now. Online shopping makes the life of the consumer a lot easier. With the tap on the
smartphone
, we can buy the orders and services. It is convenient and does the task at minimal effort. We don't have to spend our entire day buying and purchasing goods from the mall. During
last month
Suggestion
the last month
, I had ordered the
smartphone
through the online shopping sites, that was not available on my home market. If there was no
such
things as internet,
then
it was not possible to get my hand on that
smartphone
. With online services, I had
also
ordered & send
birthday cake
Suggestion
a birthday cake
birthday cakes
to my
newphew
a son of your brother or sister
nephew
nephews
, living outside the country. But with those advantages, there will be obvious disadvantages. Since, we won't know the actual goods, we may get
scam
Suggestion
scammed
for duplicate goods. There won't be any
gurantee
give surety or assume responsibility
guarantee
guarantees
on the looks and size of the product. Sometime, there is
huge difference
Suggestion
a huge difference
between the price of goods in the online shopping sites,
then
in the local market.
Last
time after a month, I realized that the purchased phone price was a way lower in my home market. It was
also
partially due to my lack of research on that
smartphone
price. So, buying things on the internet has more
advanatages
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
, since it has made my life easier & saved my valuable time.
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