Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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With the rise of

internet

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the internet

, buying consumer goods & services has become more and more popular. In my opinion, there is more advantage in

this

way that outweigh its disadvantage

Accept space

as I been online shopping for past few years now. Online shopping makes the life of the consumer a lot easier. With the tap on the

smartphone

, we can buy the orders and services. It is convenient and does the task at minimal effort. We don't have to spend our entire day buying and purchasing goods from the mall. During

last month

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the last month

, I had ordered the

smartphone

through the online shopping sites, that was not available on my home market. If there was no

such

things as internet,

then

it was not possible to get my hand on that

smartphone

. With online services, I had

also

ordered & send

birthday cake

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a birthday cake

birthday cakes

to my

newphew

a son of your brother or sister

nephew

nephews

, living outside the country. But with those advantages, there will be obvious disadvantages. Since, we won't know the actual goods, we may get

scam

Suggestion

scammed

for duplicate goods. There won't be any

gurantee

give surety or assume responsibility

guarantee

guarantees

on the looks and size of the product. Sometime, there is

huge difference

Suggestion

a huge difference

between the price of goods in the online shopping sites,

then

in the local market.

Last

time after a month, I realized that the purchased phone price was a way lower in my home market. It was

also

partially due to my lack of research on that

smartphone

price. So, buying things on the internet has more

advanatages

the quality of having a superior or more favorable position

advantages

, since it has made my life easier & saved my valuable time.

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