You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decided to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.

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Dear Martin, Hope you are recovering from the

injures

any physical damage to the body caused by violence or accident or fracture etc.

injuries

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We feel very bad for not being with you at

hospital

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the hospital

. I have a good news for you, Our Team won the Cricket

match

, hurry.As a main batman of our team you are incomparable and reliable. Most of our members accept that

you

of you or yourself

your

hardwark and

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hardware, and

hardware and

passion is something that motivate

every one

all people

everyone

in the team.

Unfortunately we

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Unfortunately, we

missed your presence on

this

match

. Through

this

match

our team got a chance to participate in upcoming finals and that what we dreamed

for

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about

. I know you will be excited to know about the

match

Best thing

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The best thing

about the

match

was the weather, It was perfectly fine for the

match

. From the Tossing opposite Team got their batting

first

. Our target score

were

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was

578 and by the end by losing 5 wickets we got 579.Even though the

match

was tough at starting it

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became

smooth at the ending. We are eager to see you again, awaiting for your Prayers

are

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always with you. Get well soon, take care. Yours Sincerely

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You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decided to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.

Fully explain your ideas

Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.

The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports and music and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become good sport person or musician. Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.

The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree?