IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 290

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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The qualities a person needs to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or any similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There was an ignited debate in recent years to argue for the importance of educational setting. Opponents to orthodox perspective did believe that the qualities that could pave the way for success were collected from other environments rather than traditional expertise. In my humble opinion, the university has partly contributed to one’s sweet fruits, other required abilities come down from real-life practices.

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In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this?

The safety of the youth is argued by many to be pivotal to the societies’ development and well-being. Adolescents, in some regions of the United States, are placed under a curfew, forbidding them from being outdoors without the supervision of a fully-grown person during a late-night hour. From my vantage point, having this time limit can be highly beneficial for both teens and the society.

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Some people think that it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Others believe that it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that companions play a vital role on an individual lifestyle. While many people believe that it is necessary to make friendship with those who have a similar point of view. Others argue that it is essential to maintain friendship with people who hold different thoughts. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument, and explain my support for the latter view.

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Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it comparing with other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?

There are various kinds of drugs and Tobacco is one of them and there is no restriction to the people to use it. There is an argument that compared with other drugs such as Heroine and Pathedrine, tobacco should be banned. This essay totally disagrees with this view because nicotine has a different impact on human than other drugs and it can be used for health treatment. In my opinion, it is better to make a new regulation than banning.

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In many cities, old buildings are being destroyed to create more space for new housing. What is your opinion?

There is no doubt that the ancient premises are part of heritage for any civilization. While nowadays in several metropolitan towns longstanding structures are under demolition, in order to provide adequate area for ultra modern residential schemes. I strongly agree with this initiative, and will support my opinion in subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree. What is your opinion?

Correspondents and news reporters are, invariably, influencing the life of the general people by applying positive methods, which show a positive sign, while some people would think that the influences come from news readers, are quite ineffective. In my opinion, whatever media telecasts on air, it benefits the public through changes in the community.

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Some people think that teenagers should follow the old generation but others believe that they sould challenge the old thoughts. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

It is a controversial issue as to whether adolescents ought to follow the convention of their ancestors, or, whether they had better raise questions on orthodox and other beliefs of older people. From my perspective, young generation excepts those thoughts of predecessors, which is essential in everyday life and rejects those sorts of beliefs that hamper them.

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Some people believe that entertainers are more important than scientists. Do you agree or disagree? Support with reasons and examples from your own experience.

It is often argued that entertainers are more influential and prime characters of the society by many people. However, I believe that scientists have greater importance than entertainers.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Purchasing on the internet has become increasingly popular over the latest decade. Thanks to this, there is a widely spread belief that the next generations will no longer see physical stores on the streets. From my perspective, despite the clear relevance of e-commerce nowadays, buying virtually does not fulfil all the necessities of clients to replace all retail stores.

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Nowadays, most people try to balance between work and other part of lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve tis balance. what are th eproblems of this? Suggest some solutions

At present, myriads of people endeavour to bring congruity between office jobs and individual activities, which is often disturbed for not maintaining a proper schedule of life. These issues of human begins should be resolved by giving work equilibrium in life.

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Some people believe that environmental problems can be solved by increasing the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environmental problems like climate change and the greenhouse effect are increasingly becoming the topic in most conferences and forums. Although a school of thought to think that increasing fuel prices for automobiles would solve these problems, I strongly disagree with this view. This essay will argue that this option will not only negatively affect the cost of living of low-income earners, but also, it will be a wrong approach to solving climate change issues.

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Some people think that the public libraries are no longer necessary, others believe that public libraries still perform useful functions. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that libraries are crucial to develop a reading culture in society. Although some people believe that public libraries are not essential anymore, while others argue that they still play a vital role to enhance knowledge. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support for the latter view.

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A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples for your own knowledge and experience

Having a balance diet, exercising, and avoiding stressful situations are widely accepted as essential keys to maintain a healthy lifestyle. For those living in a tropical country as Brazil, enjoying the warm weather and typical cuisine of the region have paramount importance to their well-being.

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Some people think that it is more effective for students ot study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views, and give your opinion.

It is a controversial issue as to whether pupils ought to study in a cohort, or, whether they should practice lessons in a quiet place without the interruption of others. From my perspective, both the methods of concentration are quite fruitful, but it is contingent upon the student that which types of study are preferred by him.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on people. Do you agree or disagree?

Certain people hold the opinion that the daily use of computers results in more detrimental than advantageous effects. Even though I agree with the statement that computers cause damaging effects on health, the positives still outweigh the harmful outcomes.

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The international community should take action immediately to ensure that all countries reduce the consumption of fossil fuels, such as gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the present era the usage of gas and oil is significantly increasing day-to-day.Some people argued that the international community should involve in this critical problem and have to take necessary actions to reduce the consumption of fossil fuels.According to my opinion, I considered this issue a vital one and I strongly agree for this argument. This essay will discuss the importance of fossil fuel and what necessary actions we can implement to reduce the unnecessary wastage of it.

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Some people say that holding sport competitions can cause problems for the host country. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is taught by some, that hosting sport competitions such as; the world cup and Olympics can cause issues for the host Country. However, others opine that it is beneficial. I agree with this view. I believe that, hosting will encourage social and economic development.

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The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Worldwide, every government shows more interest in protecting their arts and culture. Some people think that the regime should focus on public services instead of spending on arts, music and theatres. I partially agree with this notion. I do not consider investing in the arts is a waste of money, but improving public services can enhance the county's growth.

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Many people believe that it’s better to learn something in a group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree?

Learning processes can vary substantially in terms of methods. While a few learners prefer group studies, others highlight the paramount importance of studying by themselves. From my perspective, learning alone enhances the level of study productivity in comparison to groups.

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There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because computer technology is more accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

A growing number of job holders and pupils are working from residence. This reason is that the technology of a computer is providing the benefits to reach wherever people want; on the other hand, it is less expensive to enter into the mechanical world. I reckon that it is a positive advancement in this modern era.

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