IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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News is crucial in our daily activity because we set our growth by our surroundings.Individuals believe that national broadcast is more significant to the community,whereas others think that global information is more valuable .I will discuss both these views and provide a logical conclusion.
Nowadays, people usually work in factories and industries. At these ,places workers usually work in an assembly line or as labour there. Even if they do the same kind of work their financial conditions are not the same. So I agree with the statement and in this essay will provide reasonable explanations supporting the statement.
The first bar reveals the data for pineapple exports in the world in countries( A,B and C )both in 2009 and 2019. The second pie chart illustrates how the seven sectors contribute to the price of buying one pineapple in 2019.(units:metric tonnes)
The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A debate on whether or not local residents are able to do something useful for our environment, only governments and big organizations can improve our living surroundings has gained attention. While I disagree with this statement. I personally agree with both dwellers and governments as well as big companies should make efforts to protect our habitat.
The debate over whether the problem international travellers cause is greater than the advantages they bring is difficult due to the various viewpoint each party hold. In this developed world, international tourism has become a huge industry. Moreover, a lot of aborigines consider that international travel is destroying their home. Hence, I will expound on whether the disadvantage that international tourists cause is greater than the advantages they bring.
Traditional school curricula spend more time teaching subjects such as history. Some people disagree with it and think they should spend more time teaching skills that will help students get jobs in the future. I totally agree with this.
I am Lana and I was a passenger on the train from Ho Chi Minh City to Nha Trang City on 27th March 2023. My purpose in writing this letter is to report the luggage which I accidentally left on the train and ask for your help to find my stuff.
Current days migrating to foreign countries become a trend, and the purpose of this migration varies for different people. People are going for either to find jobs or further studies.as coins have two sides,these migrations have many benefits and negative effects. In this essay, I would like to discuss both these notions and explain them with proper examples.
I have heard that you are thinking about applying for the Machine Learning course at Istanbul Technical University (ITU). Islem Rekik is the instructor of this course and a famous person working in artificial intelligence. I had pass the course last semester. So, I can give you some advice.
My name is Shikha, and I am writing this letter in regard to an interview scheduled for me regarding admission to your college on 2 April 2023. I have applied for the course of Bachelor in Electronics and Communication and I got selected for further process, which is an in-person meeting. My Application number is 5687.
The line graph depicts the income made between 2002 and 2006, coming from the sales of books for children, adult storybooks, and books with an educational purpose.
The graph below shows the sales of children’s books, adult fiction and education books between 2002 and 2006. 

Summarize the info by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
At present, It is controversial among people whether fixed punishment is more effective and efficient for nowadays society, or whether each crime should be judged case by case. In this essay, the benefits of viewpoints will be examined before my perspective is reached.
The pie charts provide information about the percentage of expenditure of a university in different areas between 2005 and 2015.
The chart below show the proportion of income spent on different areas by one university, in 2005 and 2015.
Nowadays, grading systems in schools or universities have various ways, and formal also continual examinations are part of that. It is believed that the one-time exam is the only option to assess a student's performance compares to the assessment after each coursework. I completely disagree with this statement and this essay will explain why.
Due to advancements in technology, there is a number of useful stuff for human beings like, robotic cleaners, writing machines, micro-ovens etc. Due to this, many things that had been done before in homes by hand, are now being done by these machines. In this essay, I will highlight both pros and downsides of this trend along with examples and personal perceptions.
I am Maha living at 10,North Street,Ayyampet and am opened a saving account with your reputed bank here I recently applied for a personal loan.Last week, I received a response letter from the bank regarding loan assessment and verification I need to present myself with the required documents in person and the appointment time and date mentioned which is tomorrow afternoon at 2.00pm.
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