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Some countries have high unemployment rate, so some people think that children should only go to primary school, not high school because they won't find a job later. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People without occupations are increasing; hence, people suppose that children solely need to study until high school. From my perspective, I am totally against this viewpoint and will elaborate on some reasons to justify this stance.

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Some countries have high unemployment rate, so some people think that children should only go to primary school, not high school because they won't find a job later. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People without occupations are increasing; hence, people suppose that children solely need to study until high school. From my perspective, I am totally against this viewpoint and will elaborate on some reasons to justify this stance.

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In some countries the unemployment rate is high, so some people think that children should only go to primary school, not high school because they won't find a job later. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are some countries where the level of unemployment is high. Some hold that children should solely attend primary education rather than take part in high school because they have little chance of finding a job. From my perspective, I totall