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In some parts of the world, people have become more focused on themselves than their communities. What problems can this situation cause and how can they be solved?

It is fact that, in many parts of the world, people are more engrossed on themselves than the society. There can be many reasons for such situation. Both the aspects are discussed in ensuring paragraphs.

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In some parts of the world, people have become more focused on themselves than their communities. What problems can this situation cause and how can they be solved?

In the contemporary era, the public only thinks of themselves rather than their surrounding population as everyone has their own world of responsibilities or work. This trend has myriad negative ramifications such as antisocial community and globally affected societies.This essay intends to discuss these reasons followed by some viable measures for the same with relevant illustrations.

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In some parts of the world, people have become more focused on themselves than their communities. What problems can this situation cause and how can they be solved?

Nowadays people in the contemporary area are being more concentrate on themselves than their society. Therefore, many issues can be brought into these communities, and it could involve high-priority life areas such as relationships and ecology.

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In some parts of the world, people have become more focused on themselves than their communities. What problems can this situation cause and how can they be solved?

In contemporary society, more and more people prefer to more think of themselves than their surroundings. I will try to explain the reasons and consequences of these phenomena in this essay.

6.5

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In some parts of the world, people have become more focused on themselves than their communities. What problems can this situation cause and how can they be solved?

In recent times , indivuals become more cared about their own selves instead of their communities.

6.5

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In some parts of the world, people have become more focused on themselves than their communities. What problems can this situation cause and how can they be solved?

Currently, people living in some parts of the world are highly concentrated on their own rather than in the community. Some reasons pertinent for this phenomenon will be analysed in this essay and corresponding solutions will be proposed.

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In some parts of the world, people have become more focused on themselves than their communities. What problems can this situation cause and how can they be solved?

There is the tendention that people are more concentrated on own life than their family, team or society. Although this situation becomes the reason of a lot of problems our community creates solutions. In this essay I am going to discuss both issues and

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In some parts of the world, people have become more focused on themselves than their communities. What problems can this situation cause and how can they be solved?

It is more widespread in many parts of the world these days that people are highly concentrated on their own rather than in their community. There are several reasons caused by this trend, and various actions could be taken to improve the situation.

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